kit.
the lampost scene is interesting, but i think you have included too much and what gives it the charm is partially destroyed by the competing interests. there are possible 3 photos in there and this mentalp-style approach would have worked best for me:
Vuk: Love the circus tent picture.
I had it covered. I can even name the flash you used to take the shot, that isn't public It's kind of annoying that your waving a flash around shots still come out better than my carefully planned ones though.