Very nice. Now do it with an establishing sentence, cover everything in 200 words, and do it for an audience with so little understanding of music theory, you need to tell them 'interval' is about pitch rather than tempo.
Don't take this as an insult, but as an editor having to deal with tight brief commissions, here's what I'd send back to you as correct form:
Unity
Larry Young
Blue Note 4221
CD, 2x 180g 45rpm LP, 24/96 & 24/192 download
Reissued as part of Blue Note's 75th anniversary, Unity from 1965 was organist Larry Youngs second outing with the label. He was joined here by trumpeter Woody Shaw, Joe Henderson on tenor sax, and Elvin Jones on drums. Youngs harder style of hammer-ons with half-note breaks and mid-section stop changes suited the Hammond B3 and here he plays minimally with his left hand, presumably to fill in for the lack of a bassist
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Unity has a tonal uniqueness due in part to the uncommon marriage of organ, drums, tenor sax and trumpet. It is an album that mixes standards with reinterpretations of less well-known compositions. Works by Thelonious Monk and Oscar Hammerstein II sit alongside compositions by band members; three by Shaw and one by Henderson. Young's playing and carefully planned direction encouraged and captured a rare moment in jazz that hinted at a jazz that was would be explored a decade later by the likes of Ornette Coleman and Miles Davis.
In the mid 1960s, the combination of trumpet and sax would have sounded brash and brave. To ears that have already experienced the post bop era though, the effect is on the pleasant side of far-reaching and musical.
Music XX/10
Sound Quality XX/10
That still doesn't describe whether you liked the music and how the recording sounds, but that at least would fit, and would be readable by the target audience.