Well, there seems to be a difference of opinion on the resistive loading for the cartridge, from 1K to 16K; I will give it a try with loading plugs and see what I hear (no way of measuring the response and no idea of how to do it).
I have ordered some resistors and capacitors to replace components on the output stage C7 & R10, increasing R10 to 220K to increase the low frequency response, C7 is the same value, but polypropylene.
Hopefully they'll arrive tomorrow and I'll get the soldering iron out.