Fewer cap'sless caps
Agreed! These ads look like they were written by an ADHD teenager having a caffeine overdose! Seriously @rich46 you need to slow down and write proper ads with clear language and photos, if you want to sell this stuff?Fewer cap's
O.P. Seriously, if you want to sell these, list them separately with clear details or even in one ad. but SEPARATELY, with any provenance, service history and full list of accessories. Lovely machines shouldn't be advertised as some kind of job lot.
Capital letters are neither here nor there but clear word spacing and effective, detailed cosmetic and mechanical description may elicit interest. Just my take and g.l.w.s.